Starts out as a thought, a small wish
Swimming in your head like a fish,
It feels possible, yet impossible,
You start debating, should you follow this wish through??
What will happen if you try to pursue?
The wish grows bigger,
Turns into a desire,
It will get difficult to keep up,
With all the hindrances to leap up,
Like cutting the oxygen off for a fire,
Life tries to cut the string holding your dreams,
Saying “work hard for it, strive for it”
Some think that they can pick another dream,
But when a dream is lost, you lose yourself,
So don’t kill your dreams,
Just because you had to strive,
Don’t cut the string.
WRITTEN BY,
R.MAHIMA RAM
Very well composed and surely motivates to pursue your dreams even if it means working harder. Well done Mahima
Thank you soooooo much Maasi for being the best person ever 💕💕🙏🏽
Brilliantly written my girl, it made my day, sometimes we adults have doubts on what we want to achieve, your thoughts provoked mine and it has reminded me that I can't quit ,no matter what and how , we can always make our dreams come true somehow ... God bless you my little one, you have ignited the thoughts and the strong will to never give up.. keep writing, love you loads my baby ... blessed to be your Maasi
Thanks anna 🙏🏽
Great poem! Simple use of language and well penned, lovely use of metaphors... Keep on writing!