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Writer's pictureSheeba Sreenivasan

an urban girl unearthing a rice grain...

Updated: Nov 12, 2021



A rain stomps through,

crushing and flooding everything in her path,

the farmers' tears fall,


For an urban girl like me,

that what I have experienced,

was all but a wonder.


Plodding through the wet grass,

that cooled my feet,

looking up to the star-filled sky,

I start wondering,

if this was such an odyssey for me,


What about those whose battered feet

and clammy hands make no difference?


That first grain of rice, a symbol of their success,

walking day and night, back and forth,

just to see those rice grains being washed

down the belly of torrential rain.


I move forward,

not knowing which direction to move in,

absolute darkness,

the sound of crickets surround me,

I nearly trip over a small ditch.


'Twas but a minor setback for a farmer,

trust was our only weapon,

11 of us ranging from 12 to 80,

walking hand in hand.




If you were to look through my eyes,

and feel the tiny nagging fear,

then you would know how dangerous it was.


Total darkness engulfs me,

we trudge on with the moon and our flashlights guiding the way,


This experience was an eye-opener for me,

it opened my eyes to the world of a farmer,

waking up before the sun rises,

walking miles upon miles to reach the farm,

toiling hard in the hopes of a fruitful harvest,

leaving way past sunset.



Our family's bond has thus been strengthened,

with nothing but a journey, in pitch dark,

our senses, the moon's light and the spirit

of a farmer leading us to safety.


I dearly thank all farmers from the bottom of my heart,

for working so hard, for being a shining beacon of light,

in the journey of a young urban girl.



P.S-

This concept was suggested by my aiamma,

a very beautiful idea given by her.

Thank you aiamma for giving me this opportunity




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ktdeepta
16 nov 2021

😆A beautiful ode Mahims..indeed we all need the spirit of a farmer to guide us through our journey ahead

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Mani Colonel
Mani Colonel
12 nov 2021

You have an imaginative and wonderful expression with pure & simple thoughts. Couldn't imagine you doing it. You are really a talented girl. You must drive on to pursue your talent. Last I saw you was perhaps during your uncle Andrew's marriage; a tiny tot then. You must have grown up now to explore a wonderful pursuit of writing poems.


Mahima, I am Mani, Albert's long term friend from childhood days.


Your poem is an imaginative and wonderful expression with simple & pure thoughts. Couldn't imagine you doing it. You ought to realise that really you are a gifted & talented girl. You must continue to pursue your instinctive talent in you; having grown up by now to pursue such…


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thanks a lot for the absolutely lovely feedback from you uncle, it has put a smile on face, truly...thanks again for wishes uncle...


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prabhat kapoor
prabhat kapoor
12 nov 2021

farmers who puts in their diligent efforts to give us our staple food Masterfully written with clarity and empathy. Best Wishes.

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Thank you soo much for the feedback uncle✨✨

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satya roop
satya roop
11 nov 2021

Hi Mahima, A superb and wonderfully written expression. It brings out the toils and hard work being put by our farmers who puts in their diligent efforts to give us our staple food(rice). Masterfully written with clarity and empathy. Best Wishes & Good Luck. God speed.

--- Satyaroop.

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Thank you soo much for the feedback uncle✨✨

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Ramani
Ramani
11 nov 2021

Well written Mahima.. keep it up


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Risposta a

Thanks a lot uncle ✨✨

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